Actually...
....this is very good!
It combines various types of rhythms and the result may be crazy, but it is cool!
Well since you asked for some suggestions in the author's comments l'll be happy to oblige:
1.Make the track a little less repetitive on some points
2.Add some heavy beats
3.Make the transition from one melody to another smoother
Apart from that, the track is perfect!
hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.
hello again, i think its crazy and cool and experimental, something ive been leaving forgoten for a reason i dont even know lol, thats why i experimented again :D, ill work on the repetiveness since its something ive heard quite alot lately :P, as from the melodies transition im not quite sure with melodies :( and ill consider the heavy beats ;P thanks :D
Good
The beat was good and the track had some nice effects, nice work overall....
hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.
I apreciate taking the time to review it :)
Good...
....but not excellent.
The track had some intresting moments and it was good overall, but it was a bit too...uhm, let me find the right word...usual, do you feel me?
It needed some more effects, more drums, and a faster beat (and possibly a good guitar solo)...ah, and the ending was very good.
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Thanks 4 your help.
l am impressed!
You sure know how to play the piano!
The melody is very smooth and calming....and your playing makes it even smoother and calmer...
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Although it was my first piano composition, I didn't play it 0.o it wwas a piano synth. But I am strongly thinking about transcribing it...
Enjoyable
This track has a good beat, but it gets a bit repetitive after a while, but you managed to insert many sound effects to make it intresting, and you suceeded!
Ah and btw the background effect is like toxic gases being released!
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Thanks, also i think repetitiveness has something to do with ParagonX9's music. They are short, about 1:30 long. Even though people want them to be longer, imagine it longer. It will get repetitive, so imo i think she keeps it short and sweet on purpose to avoid repetitiveness. But that's just my opinion.
Yahoo!
Well, l must say that the singer is really good, and so is the guitar&bass player (you!)...you certainly have a lot of talent, you could easily make an album with songs like this!
l liked the calm rhythm of the song, it makes you relax...ah and the solo was awesome!
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Confusing but cool.
The first thing someone noticed when he listens to this track is the chaotic music, effects and beats put all together to create a chaotic but cool tune......
You have the talent, and you created a very good, smooth and enjoyable track....l hope you make more!
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thanks for the review man ...i do have another one called hit me organ donor.. its the same type of everywhere song like this
Good.Very good.
This track has smoe very nice effects...since it isn't nothing too "heavy" you can listen to it at any time...
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Thanks for the input :D
Cool!
The rhythm and the pace of this track are very good, and it gets better and better!
Everything was very good: the instruments, the beat...nice work.
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Cheers. I'm making good headway with part 3 but I think I'll spend more time experimenting with different things once I've got the basic layout done.
Ah....
Why?
Why?
Why do you submit tracks that could be very cool but are soooooooo short?
l don't want to vote very low but man, seriously, you have to make it longer.
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