Woah
Well, l have quite a lot of things to say to you...this flash was totally awesome for your first sumbission on NG...other people would submit some stickman bllshit that will be balmmed, but you actually waited and created something good before submitting it..
The drawings were VERY good and the credits were probably the best flash movie credit's l've ever seen...
This flash has only 2 flaws, and they both removed 1 point out of 10 from the final rating:
1.The sound was very loud and you couldn't figure out what the characters were saying.
2.There isn't much animation in there....most of it consists on moving back and forth...
I know that you will improve, so good luck with your next flash!